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Whispered Promises


 A Poetic Share
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I am writing poetry again, I have my whole life.
It has been how I have dealt with many situations.
Before I give you some new poems, I thought I would dig two of my favorites out of archives since they were posted here 'pre-many-of-you'.

Enjoy.

***

Widow's Peak

She walks a winding stair to the edge of the sea,
a foolish heart despises her begging pleas.
The roar of the wind and the crashing waves
Greets her soul with a power it once gave.

O emotions from the swollen tides
mysteries and life within it hides.
A salty spray moisten her eyes
mingling with the tears she cries.

Light reflects off ocean swells
searching the spirit within her that dwells;
O great and mighty the depth it contains,
some for display, while others remain.

Shading her eye, she watches the laughing gull
mocking her pain, scorched heart and emotions dull.
She turns with the wind, who wraps her dress up tight
His ship will not return to it’s port tonight.

She pulls in air, clean, free and pure,
Wondering how much longer she will endure.
She tucks a loose hair behind her ear,
And wipes away her final tear
Returning to her life once more,
While waves suck dry the ocean shore.



***
Within the Shelter of Our Heart


~dedicated to the love of my life Matthew

Time has its way,
It is free from control
It steals youth and whisks away memories
Trying to pull us asunder
But our vows are timeless, we are safe here,
Within the shelter of our heart

People have a way of dehydrating
Of trying to drain us of all recourse
To release us to the desert
Their dust withering the throat
But they can’t get to us, we are safe here
Within the shelter of our heart

Stolen thoughts may occur
Evil trying to stealth its way
To compose a sinful dance
To mock and scorn our love
Yet the music here are ballads, we are safe here
Within the shelter of our heart

Long lonely nights slit through the blinds
Trying to saturate our restlessness
Wrapping us within the cocoon of despair
creating false shadows upon our faces
But we meet in our dreams, we are safe here
Within the shelter of our hearts

Slithering fornicators forced intentions
Slipping their venom in open wounds
Yet our devotion exposes their desires
Their eyes reflect their unfaithful lust
Love exposes all evil, we are safe here
Within the shelter of our hearts

Eternity could not be enough
To harm or create a gap
We are as one, melded and bonded
Our joy, love, peace and harmony
Contained in one vow, we are safe here
Within the shelter of our heart


Posted by Whispered Promise at 6:28 PM - 40 Comments   Add a Comment  
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Whispered!

I love both of these! Good job.

Huggggggggggggggz,
Taylor
 
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by kktaylorcc (PM , CC ) on Thursday April 24, 2008 @ 7:52 PM




Those were absolutely beautiful. You are very talented!  
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by Sacred (PM , CC ) on Thursday April 24, 2008 @ 8:09 PM




Whiskers, I adore poetry and you have written these two beautifully. I too have been writing poetry since I was a very young girl. There is something satisfying about putting prose to paper. Part of your heart and soul goes into the words and it has more meaning.

Excellent writing!

Bear Hugs,
PolarB ;)
 
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by PolarB (PM , CC ) on Thursday April 24, 2008 @ 8:22 PM




Poetry is a GREAT way to get out the emotions, the thoughts...life. Glad to see you expressing yourself again!  
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by HeatherScot (PM , CC ) on Thursday April 24, 2008 @ 11:06 PM




Very beautiful, WP

ron
 
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by AZRON (PM , CC ) on Thursday April 24, 2008 @ 11:12 PM




Wow - Whisper; those are precious and thought provoking words. O for the safety that can be found in the shelter of a safe and caring heart - blessings - june  
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by Praywithhope (PM , CC ) on Thursday April 24, 2008 @ 11:29 PM




Thanks Taylor,
They were during two very opposite times of my life. They are almost like journals to me.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 2:39 PM




Thank you Sacred, I appreciate your visit and will now reciprocate the favor!  
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 2:40 PM




Thanks Polar B,
and I agree, it is much like journaling.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 2:41 PM




Thanks Heather.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 2:41 PM




Thank you Ron,
I appreciate your kind words.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 2:42 PM




True Enough June,
I love the outlet poetry has given me.
It gives me a way of journaling feelings.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 2:43 PM




You are GOOD, WP! You should write more often. They're both beautiful!  
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by Secret - Victoria's First (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 4:13 PM




Both poems are beautiful but the line that stopped me in my tracks was the last line from Widow's Peak:

"While waves suck dry the ocean shore"

It is totally unexpected and shocking, really, in the way it sums up the poems themes in seven words. Brilliant.
 
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by Anexplorer (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 5:53 PM




Whispered Promise:

It has been said that poetry is concentrated emotion. Never was that more true than in your poetry. Nice job.
 
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by Whit's Whittlings (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 5:56 PM




Thanks Secret,
I appreciate your compliment and I do need to take more time to write more often.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 7:00 PM




Thanks so much Anexplorer,
I too loved that line and felt satisfied with its ending when I wrote it. I love when I am done with a good poem because I never tire reading it. I use poetry in a journaling way, I can tell you what was happening in my life, or what I was thinking about with every poem I write.
Thanks so much for your appreciation.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 7:09 PM




I like that Whit,
'poetry is concentrated emotion'
Its very true. I can tell you what was going on in my life that made me write each poem. It is a way of capturing my emotion.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 7:11 PM




Talk about your two extremes. These are really good and powerful works. I enjoyed them a lot. I truly respect the ability to put thoughts down into good poetry. It's an incredible talent. I already know Matthew is one lucky guy. Thanks.

Bob H
 
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by RHolt (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 10:28 PM




Aw Bob,
Thanks so much for the compliment, means a lot to me.
Its my way of expressing how I feel.
Bob, I think your gal is just as lucky to have you.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 11:39 PM




I am impressed!


Very expressive poetry, Whisper.


I look forward to more!
 
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by Randy (PM , CC ) on Friday April 25, 2008 @ 11:56 PM




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You have been OVERHEARD and SEEN at my place!

It could have been a graphic or a quote,
It could have been something that you wrote!
You added greatly to my April Showers Post
So I linked to your blog as a toast,
"For all you do and all you say ...
Wishing you the BEST of this day!"

Hugggggggggggggggggggggggz,
Taylor
 
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by kktaylorcc (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 26, 2008 @ 7:15 AM




Thanks Randy,
I appreciate your comment, I hope all is well in your world.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 26, 2008 @ 10:06 AM




I am on my way Taylor girl!
This is always a blast!!!
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 26, 2008 @ 10:07 AM




great work i hope you will come by soon have a good day  
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by word of hope (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 26, 2008 @ 3:59 PM




You are very welcome and I am looking forward to hearing some of your thoughts on my work.  
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by Sacred (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 26, 2008 @ 10:21 PM




Whispered, this is beautiful, but one would expect nothing less from the likes of beautiful you.

where o where are you tonight?

wherever it is, I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
 
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by Bella (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 26, 2008 @ 11:50 PM




Thanks WoH and of course I will.  
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 27, 2008 @ 9:36 AM




Sacred,
I was able to make the trip over and left you a note,
I will come by again soon.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 27, 2008 @ 9:37 AM




AW thanks Bella,
I watched Blood Diamond with the hubby tonight.
What an incredible movie and the reality of it gets to you.
I can't even imagine the greed of people.'
I am in Maryland one more week so maybe the Saturday after I will come and play.
I miss chatting with you girlfriend!
How are you and your boy doing?
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 27, 2008 @ 9:41 AM




Those are brilliant! Excellant work on both. The one written for Matthew, made me cry.  
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by ^BELLE^ (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 27, 2008 @ 12:50 PM




Man, Whisper those were great....Can't wait for more dear friend.

Heide
 
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by Heide (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 27, 2008 @ 5:10 PM




Aww Belle,
Thanks sweetie.
You have such a great heart.
Talked about you today to the hubby, we watched the race.
I explained how we have to say it too.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 27, 2008 @ 5:54 PM




Thanks Heide,
That means a lot!
I will be sure to get them here soon too.
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 27, 2008 @ 5:55 PM




everything on my end is wonderful!  
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by Bella (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 27, 2008 @ 6:46 PM




Absolutely beautiful WP; you are very talented indeedy. Thank you for sharing.  
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by Palikari (PM , CC ) on Monday April 28, 2008 @ 7:49 PM




Hey Whispered ... You have to do this or else! LOL

RULES:
1. Title of the TAGGED blog must be, TAGGED #1: 5 Random Facts.
2. Must answer the questions sent to you and tell who tagged you in your blog.
3. Cannot tag someone who already tagged you or tag someone twice.
4. Must send the SAME questions the people who tagged you to the person you are tagging. (CANNOT CHANGE THE QUESTIONS!!!).
5. Please restate the questions before answering.
6. Please notify tagger if you don't want to participate.
7. Can only tag one person
8. Please copy and paste the rules and questions to whoever your tagging
9. Have fun!
10. You must state who you are tagging next in your blog.

QUESTIONS:
1. Why do you blog?
2. Scariest moment in your life?
3. Top 5 songs on your iPod? (if you don't have an iPod, just give your 5 favorite songs)
4. What are your interests/hobbies?
5. What do you hope to accomplish in the next 5 years?

Lets try and get 20+ Blogstreamers playing! For an example of what your "TAGGED" blog post should look like, go to Bella's page.

This started with the new dude, Tyler who sent it to PolarB who sent it to Sherry who sent it to Bella who sent it to me who sent it to you!

They say to do it ... or else you wake up tomorrow horribly disfigured with a green hunchback, but I never put much stock in green hunchbacks ... LOL ...

... and if you wanna read mine they're posted over here!

 
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by kktaylorcc (PM , CC ) on Monday April 28, 2008 @ 7:52 PM




Awww Thanks Pali!!
That means muchess coming from you!
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Monday April 28, 2008 @ 9:44 PM




Hey Whispered ... You have to do this or else! LOL

RULES:
1. Title of the TAGGED blog must be, TAGGED #1: 5 Random Facts.
2. Must answer the questions sent to you and tell who tagged you in your blog.
3. Cannot tag someone who already tagged you or tag someone twice.
4. Must send the SAME questions the people who tagged you to the person you are tagging. (CANNOT CHANGE THE QUESTIONS!!!).
5. Please restate the questions before answering.
6. Please notify tagger if you don't want to participate.
7. Can only tag one person
8. Please copy and paste the rules and questions to whoever your tagging
9. Have fun!
10. You must state who you are tagging next in your blog.

QUESTIONS:
1. Why do you blog?
2. Scariest moment in your life?
3. Top 5 songs on your iPod? (if you don't have an iPod, just give your 5 favorite songs)
4. What are your interests/hobbies?
5. What do you hope to accomplish in the next 5 years?

Lets try and get 20+ Blogstreamers playing! For an example of what your "TAGGED" blog post should look like, go to Bella's page.

This started with the new dude, Tyler who sent it to PolarB who sent it to Sherry who sent it to Bella who sent it to me who sent it to you!

They say to do it ... or else you wake up tomorrow horribly disfigured with a green hunchback, but I never put much stock in green hunchbacks ... LOL ...
Tag Your Turn!!
 
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by Whispered Promise (PM , CC ) on Monday April 28, 2008 @ 10:23 PM




Thanks I really appreciate it!  
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by Sacred (PM , CC ) on Wednesday April 30, 2008 @ 12:08 AM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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